The Item im having made. comments?
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Looks great??!! Really???!!
Looks like shit to me. Last edited by fedea1234#5308 on Apr 15, 2012, 3:07:25 AM
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" What don't you like about it? Please be specific, and refrain from straw-man and ad hominem attacks. =^[.]^= =^[.]^= basic (happy/amused) cheetahmoticon: Whiskers/eye/tear-streak/nose/tear-streak/eye/
whiskers =@[.]@= boggled / =>[.]<= annoyed or angry / ='[.]'= concerned / =0[.]o= confuzzled / =-[.]-= sad or sleepy / =*[.]*= dazzled / =^[.]~= wink / =~[.]^= naughty wink / =9[.]9= rolleyes #FourYearLie |
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I dont like the flavor text, it doesnt read right to me.
Minorly, I think it would read better if there was no comma in the 2nd sentence. Majorly,I dont think you "lie" about fate, maybe you run from fate, maybe it could be a quote from death himself as its implied to be his axe? Something like: "You can accept your fate, or run my friend. I'll collect you in the end." Kinda goes more toward the "reaper's pursuit". Good job being a diamond though mate, you rock regardless. |
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Wow, harsh criticism. I am SO not sharing mine before it's in-game and too late for anyone to say otherwise!
If I like a game, it'll either be amazing later or awful forever. There's no in-between.
I am Path of Exile's biggest whale. Period. |
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I like the flavor text for the axe (I always <3 flavor text) but I am kind of 'meh' about the graphical appearance of the model.
Its hard to describe, but it almost has a biological look to it, like a few curved plant-like shapes stuck together. This is just my opinion, so others may love the look of it.I personally prefer jagged/brutal styles with intricate details. Unique particle effects are always nice too. an example is the ICC axe Shadowmourne from WoW. jagged bits - check reasonable functionality - check intricate detail - check strewth, it even whispered creepy stuff to you during the long drawn out questline for forging the axe.  sorry if this post is taken as a long winded waffle, I just wanted to explain my view point rather than just saying "i don't like it" just my 2c :: sƃuıɥʇ ɟo ʎɔuɐʇsuoɔ ǝɥʇ ɟo ʎʇılɐǝɹ lɐuıɟ ǝɥʇ ǝq plnoʍ sıɥʇ ʎɐʍɐ ʇǝƃ
plnoɔ ƃuıɥʇou ʇɐɥʇ os plɹoʍ ǝɥʇ uı plɹoʍ ǝɥʇ ǝpıɥ oʇ ǝɹǝʍ noʎ ɟı ʇnq :: |
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Everyone loves a sentient weapon...
If I like a game, it'll either be amazing later or awful forever. There's no in-between.
I am Path of Exile's biggest whale. Period. |
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" Nuh-UH! Especially the ones which have no respect for me as wielder! I mean, is that all I am to them, just a hand (or two), to get them swinging? =0[.]o= =^[.]^= basic (happy/amused) cheetahmoticon: Whiskers/eye/tear-streak/nose/tear-streak/eye/
whiskers =@[.]@= boggled / =>[.]<= annoyed or angry / ='[.]'= concerned / =0[.]o= confuzzled / =-[.]-= sad or sleepy / =*[.]*= dazzled / =^[.]~= wink / =~[.]^= naughty wink / =9[.]9= rolleyes #FourYearLie |
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Looks good, really liking that flavor text
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ohh man, i wanna deadset FARM for that axe :P. awesome item especially the "always hit" stat.
good job! "The purpose of life is a life with a purpose, so id rather die for a cause than live a life that is worthless"
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" Hehe, exactly! It's your item, design it how YOU want. |
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