Dueal Totem Build Help ( Fireball + Fork )

Hello guils i`m kinnda new to the game tho i have wathed all the PoE guides and i played for a while. I`m planning on getting a dual totem templar build with fireball + fork and i want to know your thought on this build

Fire totem build:
http://www.pathofexile.com/passive-skill-tree/AAAAAgUBAnEEswVbEmkUTRccGjgabB8CKU8qjSycLKctHzbFNtg62ENjRKtG10kbTdhVrlj1WfNaK13GYG1mnnFNcXl9U4FvgpuDOIdli4yMdo-mkFWXhZrPnC2dgJ2uncSePKIAo_KnCKeEr7e2hrcxwBrYJN0F3fPhc-Qi7DjsVe0g8B_xbA==


This is the build that i came up with, let me know what do u think of it and what can i imporve.
I my focus is alot of dmg and life but i kinda lack mana and crit chance..
What do u think i can drop from it ?