wanna staff build / help me cre)) ppl!

my 1 hero/ never played in this game. Many years ago i play in 1 diablo - its was amazing,now i here!
http://www.pathofexile.com/passive-skill-tree/AAAAAgUABLMOPA6tD1QS2RRNFHEW-RjbGjgaPiECIVUhYCi1KQcppTIJM0A08jkOOlI62DuMQKBBqkN5Q5xEckWOTdhUkVW1VgRZ813GYG1giGFSYwtmoHKpdPF7jIFvgziExIZgiDiIj4p0jHaO9JBVkweXAZ2AnYqePJ7NogCnMKeEqWipc6yqr3O1BLdyvTnAGsEExYrJZ9WL3D3d89-_7DjvTvAf8az3Mve--Ov7iw==

build dont have enough crit to be a crit build, nor does it have enough health. besides that what skills are you going to use? i made this build version for you with lightning strike in mind, you can use it if you want.
http://www.pathofexile.com/passive-skill-tree/AAAAAgEAxth7jFhjIQJQUDTyjM-pc_ZIOQ5fPyFVVEkx--dS7w653fIv1I8ZLiftxPbz3ayqxBVZ80ouwBq5Q2aekFUW-VSRp6X60qeEiDhmoDbpHRQaOJ2K-4skquNqj0bsOBmFpwjQ0IFJV-La3biTm6HPZbI4d-UyiQx999dnvVXGZk8EsxB_W1kWbxRN8B-BbwJxxp6ftKIAqWiePFiuGF1N2Hy7jHbzcTwtxq7-CvJF52O3Pnq4rpOmVzrhiPFuqjJ-tfKpbk3jrFn-jw==