[2.6] SC Brass Dome, Starforge, Lacerate

So i am trying for first time to do my own build here's what i thought about:
Crit Lacerate using Starforge, Brass Dome, Abyssus, Veruso's Battering Rams and maybe Gifts from Above

Links:

Lacerate -> Melee Phys -> Faster Attack/Additional Accuracy -> Multistrike -> Inc Crit -> Inc AOE/Conc


Here is the tree:
https://www.pathofexile.com/passive-skill-tree/AAAABAEBAAHcBLMFLQYgBqIGxgixC2ENjRDwEuEUIBRxF9waOBo-G6oj0yP2LdIwfDGwNZI64TwtPfw__EMxR35KfUz_TZJN404qUEdYY1nzW69dpF8_YxdlTWebaPJvJ3KpdKB07Xasd-N5aH1zgTqCB4Nfg8yE2YTvh2qHdozPjX2PYJBVkGyRzpJ9mG-aap8-ogCi6qOKplepJ6luqZSsqq0Jrj6vbLc-u-29Nr6nwAHBBMEHxPbGrsbYyx7L9c9-0jjUUtd-2L3ZfNrB3CPcvd3V5FHlz-cP6GbqGO4O7w7wH_Iv8kXyWvZI9zL46_zF_gr-jw==

Tell me pls what do u think about it and what would you change. I am looking forward to see your opinions and thoughts about it :D