looking for a opinion

as the title says

can a tree like this work?

this should be malee LL build whit

but i have never created a build before or played LL

any opinions are welcome Thanks

How about this? :)

http://www.poeplanner.com/AAECAQoAcK_rxKLfmGJalwYZisM6KjibtYTFJIsPqxa_df2Eb9RCtUjrYxEvKwpd8g5IEZYBCbjZ3UgHHpUu8NVJUZAbcFaaE9vUj_rQ0F9qRwbb57TFFf2KOGSvRfRvVyLqLVUWqj3RBX0M8qXL2HZW9dtul9COirk-rGYs4X3jf8aiow_EO3y4ypMnXIpsCyL0bRnZWxslS67pAhFQNbmnKySd037veu-I-TfXz0mxvoqhL8rTtAzqug185-r5MzQKN2YspqbrN4P2oxUg3Q3glZ-CVugISbLcFyZ6hNCtQdBfcINt


Edit: What skill are you planning on using? Dual wield? Varunastra + shield? By the way, with varunastra you really want to take Deadly Dilletante cluster as you get all 3 increases from it. From that one cluster for varunastra you gain: 24 IAS, 108 increased phys, 75% crit chance. You were going for the dual wield cluster, not sure why and not sure why you didnt take dagger nodes with crit multi etc.

oh ur tree looks so much beter and to answer ur question , never rly played male before (other that 1 earthquaker) so i had no clue what are good nodes to pick

and for the skill , honestly i have no idea w/e feals best :D mb ground slam coz it looks awesome