Feedback for my Let's Play

This may get deleted, I'm sorry, I do not plan to spam links or do anything like this in the future.

Let me explain myself.

I've recently started making Let's Plays, and I'm having a lot of fun doing it so far. I've spent all week working on the three videos that I have put up, staying up late after work to make the time. So far I have not heard any feedback, I was hoping to get an honest response.

What do you like or dislike?
Do I come across as cheesy? (I'll admit I get a little nervous once I hit record, but I am improving I think)
Is the audio and video quality up to standard?
I'm currently working on an Intro, so hopefully that will be up soon.

Honestly, I just want to know if I should change anything. I don't want to spend hours and hours making videos, to realize I should have changed something from the start.

https://youtu.be/nfRHYUympGk

I would love to hear your thoughts, even if you hate it!