feedback on my rain of arrow tanky templar?

Pretty much the title, I'm relatively new and I'd like some help with my build. It's probably terrible but whatever, gotta start somewhere right? This is for HC btw.

http://www.pathofexile.com/passive-skill-tree/AAAAAgUAAecCcQSzBS0FWxLhFCAUTRkuGjghYCSLJ-0otS3SMgkyfjKJNug26TpSOtg8BT0PQKBN41BHUFBUSVYEVw1X4lhjWK9fP2BLYIhhUmaebqpyqXTtdPF35XgNeu98u3zZffWDOIZghymLjIzPkFWRzp65ns2f36IAouqnMKeEqW6sWayqtfK53cAaxPbG2NIh1I_ZYd-_42rnUuw47w7vTu988i_z3fZI97760v6P

Thanks!

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improved version: http://www.pathofexile.com/passive-skill-tree/AAAAAgUAAnEEswVbBfkOrRRNFSAV8BjbGS4aOBrbHRQn7SmlKk0s6TJ-Mok26TrYOuE8BTwtPydDnEp9TdhQUFRJVcZW-lfiWGNZ81uvXz9jp2aeZ6Bqk25pbqpyqXTxd-V6uHzZgziHdojxi4yMdozPj0aQVZcGnrmf36IAplenhKyqrpO3PrndwA_AGsSixLjE9sauxtjK089l0NDUj9X43Q3dRuNq51LnY-w47g7vDu988B_yL_JF9kj5Y_rS_E78xf4K_r8=

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