Advice/Critique needed on newbies build.

Just died on HC with my DW Ranger and I was going to start again as it was going fairly well, just made a terrible decision to try and face tank when it wasn't needed or advisable.

So instead of making the exact same character and build I thought I would try some thing similar with another character, just wondering if this looks like it could hold up? And if not, why?

It looks to be able to swap out some offensive and defensive nodes fairly simply if there are some minor issues, but that is if it is not complete trash! I'm fairly new to the game and still getting to grips with every thing really.