Build feedback please

http://www.pathofexile.com/passive-skill-tree/AAAAAgMAVysHY-aBEVC71jvh4venK4t6bRnB86Kjf8bBxSy_T7_sGMNtHNyTJzdmLKam6zeD6rqfe3i6OBuRz-QREZYOSOOEiGu29xEv62OZmofbpzRjQ0qMV4eArvrvogQBzC0fTLMEB8Uo9lslAVm8UDDbXuvkfM50VV8qAP0UsND7h55KmvMFEb8pVPxkNMudo_yraj9TuIVVidMqC9-wjr4RLXyDzfq4k-vuhEg8jgFvV8k0CpLBD8Tcxzt8Wqa4yhHbM3YZ18BR8-pw1XBSOjCSODGJYbE5Urw3Tm1YB35Z

Hi all,

This is my first go at making a build link above, im currently lvl 18 in HC.

From looking at the tree i have decided to go for defense of high energy shield + CI, picking up resists on the way.

for damage going heavy into wand damage and double curses (curses was just convenient as it was very close to all the wand ability's i wanted)
I have also tried to pick up a lot of crit to go with the knock back on wand crits.

Mainly going to use power siphon and elemental hit, i have also picked up +2 (5) power charges.

Please let me know if you think this is going to work.

Cheers All

i have revised the build to

http://www.pathofexile.com/passive-skill-tree/AAAAAgMBVysHY-aBEVC71jvh4venK20ZwfOio3_GwcUsv-wYw20Rlg5I44SIa7b3ES-nNGNDSoxXh4Cu-u-iBC0fTLMEB8Uo9lslAVm8UDDbXuvkfM50VV8qAP0UsND7h55KmhG_KVT8ZDTLnaP8qw_E3Mc7fFqmuMrAUfPqcNVwUn5ZHwI2xdsC0xt4zqcIj0YdFPrSZp5xTZrPQ2O3MYFJsjhY9Z3EqZVwfU99Zk8WQIV92CQpT4Kb5CK1BF3GRtcZ1z9z7Dg62E3YjHZX4nflMYlhsVFggFby4cLsRwZfavfB

i think this is far superior.

Some thoughts would be great