Scion - Tri-Totem EK idea - Forum

I just picked up the armor and I'm really excited to test out this build. I've been working on passive trees before I start, and wanted some feedback on this creation.

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http://www.pathofexile.com/passive-skill-tree/AAAAAgABD8QQzBGWFecZhRzcHRQkPCSqJpUnqSftKhMrtiynLUctqDGeNZI26Tt8PC1GcUlRSshN41BCVUtVxlnzWlJabVqmXfJeXWZPZp5uqnBScNVzs3sgfll_xoFJgwmIQojxjDaMRo9GkFWTJ5tdnaOiLqKjo_KmV6cIp1ynhKeUqJqsWayqsZCyOLQMtfK3PrfWuJO4ysAawcXDE8T2xq7PZdDQ0f3VT9rd21ncx95342rnY_Br8h3yl_Pd-JP60vyr_gr-h_6P

My goal when building this is: 170%+ Hp, Picking up the damage influencing totem nodes and to be aimed at finishing at level 80.

I do feel this build may be a little too all over the place and I was thinking of either dropping crit all together and focusing more on spell damage or going double curse.

Spoiler

http://www.pathofexile.com/passive-skill-tree/AAAAAgAACGe31vKXV-HbWZtd-WUtqKiaIcOxkFpSkNaDCUrIbqo_J7XyKk01khUg_o-sWYPbTeOI8fxLplfnY85xMZ7-CmwWtz7GrjwtEMzE9v6HK7Yn7XsgjEbz3ayq-JNyqVnz9zIqE8Aa-OvDE2aekFVKxCyn-tJY5aPyNukdFPauJKrjao9GGYWnCNDQ2t24k5uhz2XN-qeU99dVxnyDXl3R_ayYES0UsI6-OjAsnDlSVa6us7w3RKsFQk5tj6ZBllgHghDfsA==

This is the alternative build I came up with. There's an extra point to bump the health back to a comfortable level, and post-80 it would be focused around more health. Dex was a worry, that's why I went for the cluster to the right of Sentinel.

I'm honestly thinking the alternative build might be better.