Beginner Scion Build

Alright, I'm using a Scion, and her jack-of-all-trades characteristic is intriguing. I'm currently contemplating my build option. I went as a staff wielding Templar first, so I want to do something significantly different.

I plan on having her as a Sword & Board (longsword, not rapier) type gal, with a penchant on critical hits. Her main skills will be (as of now) Spectral Throw for Ranged play, Cleave for groups, and a Spell Totem for support. I'm trying not to have her spread too thin. This is my planned spec for her (up to lvl 60 for now)

http://www.pathofexile.com/passive-skill-tree/AAAAAgAB2E2UoNpijFi9Jxg8-ehBh7c-xq48LcT2PQ999bMxSk9lLxK8WfOYb5J95c8M9yQl6dXAGmae-tJwfamVGjJRYB0UTDUoxfO-j0aBSbI4Zk8WQIV9OygDlm49mHQtqLGQgwlvnspKwzqbtRmKLYOXBsSilcjfmGJa

Is that a good point to start off at?

My planned skillset will be (as of this writing)

Spectral Throw
Elemental Hit
Cleave
Spark (via Spell totem)
Tempest Shield
Critical Weakness
Wrath

How does this sound? Any advice to make my idea work? I want the basics to remain (Sword & Board, crit gal, Spectral Throw, etc) but I'm a tad iffy on the skill tree. I'm not looking for the bestest uber build, mind you, but I don't want it to suck.