need lightning tendrils tree critique

https://poebuilder.com/character/AAAAAgAAsZAtqNtZt9aDCfnoGDy9J5M6CGc1kti9_gq3PkGHSshuqrXyhTJ08RjbW6_dDSzpFSAqTT8nljLIWxW4PV9SU5f0bRki9GwLDY0c3JMntAxGcZeV3YzZX-ASjRl-rxEP215QMEyzY0MOSBGWf8Zd8nBSidNw1aSRfjMTnow2JpVh4lVL2wuCHohCwcUUqd7lVi2pbgcelS5JUfDV8h1knev1j_pBlq6zBULQ9SycSbHXz_k374gqU2KVsnCmV03j_o864fJFSn2Hdmeg_MWQ1iHD-WVX4USrVa6Ppt-wghA6s3cHhxOcpG-eflk=
Hi guys! There's the tree, I haven't attempted constructing my own passive tree since I failed my first couple of chars so I'm nervous about this one. EB + MoM self cast tendrils from Scion start. I have 118 points allocated but in the very realistic event that I only make it to like level 85 I'd just drop some life from the scion wheel and the Witch start spell damage nodes. I plan on playing in Beyond

For the love of god, don't take Mind Over Matter. Use Cloak of Defiance or just get by with Arctic Armour.

Take Coordination, take Heart and Soul, Cruel Preparation is strictly stronger than three 5% life nodes...