Freeze Pulse passive tree help

Yo.

Wanted to know what you guys think about this build I just made 5mins ago. Where to improve it and such. It's the first time I made one myself so be harsh on me pls.




The focus? Just u know PEW-PEW-PEW-PEW like the old days and freeze.

For Hardcore.


Thank you in advance.

bumpy

bumpy2

bumpy3

You're kind of going all over the place for mediocre life and a bit of armor.

Is armor going to be your main defense?
If so why did you pick Shadow start? (Templar might be a bit better)


Edit:
Spent a few secs on it, more life, armor, etc., same offense, Shadow start

http://www.pathofexile.com/passive-skill-tree/AAAAAgYARXyXlxXn8Gtzs4w2Av5VS9-EYeJCwyaVXfIOSHDVEZaJ03_GBx5wUi-doqOVLioLFvPB8w_E8NXz6iY8gh6VIDt8j_pJURSw2wtrFy0fuMrsGOv1TC286kyzN4FkncMJEQ8XVMBUrrPyHbmTrJifAY48akMI9EGW99c6WNHkVkoFQtD1m6FVxo2CnqEsnI9Gg9tT1CKBVa4QWB0URKuvm_rSj6aVBGaeNumCEMAacU0kquNq37CQVZrPFm-nhENjGji3Mew4WPU62J3ETdiMduOENj2dqmKsbIyePIFvBLMUTaIA8B_k6-NWUrI=

Well, I chose shadow cause when I first started playing (1 or 2 years ago) I made the kripp FP build, and since then I've always been fond of shadows. (EK, FS etc)

My main defense? Probably life/armor.
All I really want is the dmg/freezing shit all over the place.

Thx for the help so far, definitely way better passive tree than mine.

I basically still play a variation of kripp's armor/hp FP build, but I have more crit dmg (less hp though). In turn I run CWDT along with IC and CWDT with EC for some nice defensive synergy. I run 3 auras (vit, clarity, haste) + herald of ice as well. Here's my passive tree so far:



9k dps on GMP (before power charges) and 11k with 5 charges. Spell echo nor herald have been maxed lvl yet, and I'll get about another 1k dps before I reach lvl 20 on both gems. Oh and I can clear solo maps up to 75 no problem :D

Thank you very much