Critique My Game Character Design @_@ (+Music Theme added)
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Hi, I'm in the process of trying to design a game character. I've still got a whole lot to learn. But I invite you to rip apart my game character design as I work on it. I'm not sure what or who she is yet =p. But she's part of a presentation I'm making in the next few days.
Still WIP, nothing is finished. I added a music theme for this character. I have been working on her and other stuff but I don't want to post it up atm. But here is her music theme that I'm working on. If you listen to it, turn up the volume to a respectable level plz so you can hear it and if you have a critique then feel free to say something. Character Theme, "Bear" Face:
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 Body:
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 Last edited by BearCares#6660 on May 21, 2014, 7:03:41 PM
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Looks anatomically proportionate (and rather pleasing if I do say so myself, which I do), but is there any particular criteria by which we should be judging this?
Still in the alpha stage, but at least build diversity isn't an issue: https://wolcengame.com/home/
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Get rid of the horns. They take away from a very pleasing design.
EDIT: And try dressing women in less reveling clothes for a change. (just saying) |
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" Well thanks guys. I suppose that I wanted to get a general Reaction, Glad to see you didn't immediately think" ugly" And about her clothes, you have to understand that they are WIP but also, I started sculpting her without any clothes and so, for me, I know her originally as being nude. I think that's why I gravitate towards clothes that reveals her anatomy. I'm not putting anyone into skimpy. Clothing in order to get my jollies =] |
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Pelvis seems a bit wide but otherwise gg.
Be ready. You're not paranoid, you're PREPARED.
I quit this game every few months and so should you to continue playing it in the future. The device is believed to have been dropped |
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" child-bearing hips |
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Mature hips.
Edit: An could also have a bare midriff without focusing too much on the pelvic region as video games are for some strange reason always doing.
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Men will be boys when T&A are hinted at.
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At least cover her stomach. I fucking hate midriffs, holy shit. I'm not too bothered my un-armored thighs as those give a lot of flexibility in combat, but having a flexible, yet protective armor on the stomach is very important. It's one of your most vulnerable spots and I hate when it's left open on every fucking female character in most games.
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How about the barely covered rear?
Armor great on a male, but not the female? Make female specific armor would be more impressive. Still, good work so far. |
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nice work. are you rigging it afterwards?
I need more purple titles
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