What about this ?

Hi, I´m begginer so can u help me please ? now I have this

http://www.pathofexile.com/passive-skill-tree/AAAAAgUAAnEEswVbFE03RzmKOtg8LURyRtdM_13GfLt9U4TEiuSLjJvsogCvbLaGxYrd8-Fz7SDwHw==


but I wont do something like this .. is this good way ? and what is the best next? thanx lot.

http://www.pathofexile.com/passive-skill-tree/AAAAAgUAAnEEswVbDPcUTRmFGjIaOBznIPAjTSQlJKopLjbpN0c5ijrYPC09_EA2RHJE50bXTP9N2E99UFBRYFhjXcZgbWaeZ5tqHmo7cH1343y4fLt9U4BWgW-ExIrki4yMdozPkFWb7J48ogCnhKgYqZWuPq9stPm2hrndwBrFisbY1I_d8-Fz42rp1ew47SDvDvAf8i_2SPrS