Frozen Maiden - Scion ice/crit + MT + EB (NEED HELP to improve/HC viable)

Sup guys, i wanted to make a scion version of the ice crit witch but instead of going CI i wanted to go with Eldritch battery and Mind over matter + life combo.

ill go over skills and gear later, but gems are basically the same as ice witch

i need an input from you guys who will probably help me get this build alot better since im new at making builds.

here is what i came up with:

critical strike is not the same as spell critical.

this is my take.


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Grace 60%/reduced mana
(dunno if that might be too much mana reserved, but grace counts directly to armor because of iron reflexes->less dmg taken)

enduring cry/clarity/blood magic

freeze pulse/faster projectiles/added cold/lmp/(cold to fire quality)

cast on dmg taken/moltenshell/elemental weakness/Frostbite(/temp chains)

+1/+2 curse gear endgame and some other adjustments in gems+skiltree if needed

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another idea would be to use point blank and go a complety diffrent route...