My first machinima

Hello guys i've played here since open beta:)
So today i've made my first machinima for elder scrolls skyrim:) and i wanted to ask you
guys for some advices.
I mean should i make them more comic or serious?
Should i add voice actors or just text?
Here is my first video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4HYn5gNfwE


So what do you think?:D

pretty nice, keep up the nice work.