I am waiting for Betakey as a present

Dear donor,

if you have an extra Betakey, please give it to me.
I would be very happy.

PS: I don´t will pay for it and you will only get my sincerely thanks in return.
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Wercato wrote:
Dear donor,

if you have an extra Betakey, please give it to me.
I would be very happy.

PS: I don´t will pay for it and you will only get my sincerely thanks in return.


This is how your statement should have been worded:

Dear honorable Beta member,

If you happen to have a friend Beta key, would you please find it in your heart to send it my way?

I would greatly appreciate this wonderful gift of joy. I say joy because it would bring an intense feeling of happiness to my nervous system, causing me to twitch.

PS: I will not pay for a key, instead, you will only receive a thanks.
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Lythium wrote:
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Wercato wrote:
Dear donor,

if you have an extra Betakey, please give it to me.
I would be very happy.

PS: I don´t will pay for it and you will only get my sincerely thanks in return.


This is how your statement should have been worded:

Dear honorable Beta member,

If you happen to have a friend Beta key, would you please find it in your heart to send it my way?

I would greatly appreciate this wonderful gift of joy. I say joy because it would bring an intense feeling of happiness to my nervous system, causing me to twitch.

PS: I will not pay for a key, instead, you will only receive a thanks.


English is obviously not the OP's first language, it's kind of a dick move to point out his flaws. He formulated a decent plea that is understandable and for an ESL individual that is a pretty good start.
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DaVulf wrote:
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Lythium wrote:
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Wercato wrote:
Dear donor,

if you have an extra Betakey, please give it to me.
I would be very happy.

PS: I don´t will pay for it and you will only get my sincerely thanks in return.


This is how your statement should have been worded:

Dear honorable Beta member,

If you happen to have a friend Beta key, would you please find it in your heart to send it my way?

I would greatly appreciate this wonderful gift of joy. I say joy because it would bring an intense feeling of happiness to my nervous system, causing me to twitch.

PS: I will not pay for a key, instead, you will only receive a thanks.


English is obviously not the OP's first language, it's kind of a dick move to point out his flaws. He formulated a decent plea that is understandable and for an ESL individual that is a pretty good start.


I don't think Lythium was pointing out any flaws... I just think he was trying to make it more humorous. Lol
key? amywhere?
Um, yeah. It seems like you take things too serious DaVulf. From what I see, I only see humor.

its rlly sad how many ppl sell this keys for 2€ or something..... and most of theses keys are obv fakes

btw. ill need a key also :D
Last edited by fall0ut on Feb 21, 2012, 9:59:08 AM
Dear honorable Beta member,

If you happen to have a friend Beta key, would you please find it in your heart to send it my way?

I would greatly appreciate this wonderful gift of joy. I say joy because it would bring an intense feeling of happiness to my nervous system, causing me to twitch.

PS: I will not pay for a key, instead, you will only receive a thanks.

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