(UNI PROJECT) 5 THINGS YOU MAY NOT HAVE KNOWN ABOUT BLOCKING!

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Arrowneous wrote:
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Shagsbeard wrote:
spell "too" right.

He isn't an English major. Correct grammar and spelling seems to be a dieing skill in the age of the Internet and 140 character limited tweets.

Hell, I'd be happy if all forum posters knew how to make properly formatted URL links.

Path of Exile - 5 THINGS YOU MAY NOT HAVE KNOWN ABOUT BLOCKING!

At least the op did make real links so I don't have to cut/paste the full address into a new tab.



A dying skill indeed.


HA!
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Arrowneous wrote:
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Shagsbeard wrote:
He's not tweeting. He's preparing a project for a university level class. He should spell "too" correctly.

Oh I absolutely agree. I forgive anyone posting when English is their 2nd language. They usually say that "my English is not too good" but either way when English is a 2nd language I never care that a sentence isn't quite right. Everyone else should be able to use proper grammar, spell correctly, and double check the red underlined words to make sure they are correct.


Nah, I'll get nailed for it. I'll have to change it when I submit it. Luckily I've just started my uni so the first few projects are pretty easy, I'm glad it was pointed out!
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tidbit wrote:
My only suggestions:
1) Brighter text. I have bad eyes :P the text didn't pop out as much as I'd like.
2) BG music was way to loud. turn it down by like 50% atleast. And (not a big deal) not really fitting for a dark fantasy game.


Thanks for the reply bud! Yeah I wasn't to sure about the text either. I really need to start going with my "gut" when something feels wrong! And you're not the first person to point that out the music either, also I have use royalty free music, the pickings are a tad slim haha. I'll definitely make a note on that! cheers!
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Last edited by fight4anarchy on Jul 23, 2017, 8:51:44 PM
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鬼殺し wrote:
Ugh, that music.

Heh, you used a sword that can't be dual-wielded while talking about dual-wield blocking. Amusing!

Why did you change fonts for point 4? Jarring.

'For example, some skills are' is badly worded. You've already got 'Not all skills can be blocked...'. After that, 'For example' suffices.





Music is royalty free and the catalogue comes from the university so I'm working with I have, trust me it wasn't my first choice haha.

Jarring is maybe a bit strong haha, but the font never changed, its the size, that was due to the size on png's I used, it just didn't all fit on the page.

Yeah that wording was fucked haha. I've already fixed that for the assignment!

Thanks for the feedback bud!
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鬼殺し wrote:
Hmm. I'd recommend finding a way of making the size consistent then. If a lay viewer like me perceives it as a shift in font, that's probably not awesome.


fair enough man! Ill definitely take note of that!
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