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Character panel - Charges tab: "PHYSICAL DAMAGE REDUCTION PER ENDURACE CHARGE"
Should be ENDURANCE.
Fixed this one!
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Posted byMark_GGGon Feb 12, 2012, 5:57:33 PMGrinding Gear Games
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When you talk to Yeena about Greust: "Greust does what he thinks is right. And in Gruest's head, he is never wrong."
Fixed, thanks.
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Posted byRhyson Feb 12, 2012, 10:35:28 PMGrinding Gear Games
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It should be "ones", without the apostrophe.
Gah, I swear I've fixed this before. Fixed again...
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I think it should be "chrushes" instead of "crush" in the flavour text of Demigod's presence, because "delight" is singular.
No, it's definitely just "crush". And "delight" isn't actually singular here, it's used as a verb.
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Posted byRhyson Feb 13, 2012, 3:22:33 PMGrinding Gear Games
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Fixed appearance.
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Posted byRhyson Feb 13, 2012, 6:39:20 PMGrinding Gear Games
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Thaumaturgist, yes. Fixed now.
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Posted byRhyson Feb 13, 2012, 11:09:33 PMGrinding Gear Games
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Have fixed the "make", and a quick googling shows that Embroided is a word - Though the name is temporary, and may change in future.
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Posted byRoryon Feb 14, 2012, 6:54:46 PMGrinding Gear Games
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There's an item type called " Embroided Boots" which I believe should be " Embroidered Boots".
Looks like embroided is a common misspelling of embroidered, i.e. something which was made with embroidery. Will change.
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Timeworn Espirit in the pyramid. Supposed to be Spirit? Or is E-spirit like E-peen? :P
As desohpos and caaaps said, espirit is a common misspelling of the originally French esprit, pronounced "eh-spree", which means "morale". I'm not entirely sure this was the intended meaning, but looking at the names of the other monsters in that area, it seems more likely than just spirit. I'll change it, at least for now.
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Oh alright. Thanks for the clarification. It just sounded odd to me. Then again, I'm not a native speaker.
I thought in order to be able to crush something, it had to be a noun.
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The court maidens delight in seeing you crush those who dare challenge you.
The noun being crushed is actually a noun phrase: "those who dare challenge you."
"to delight in" means to take delight from something. So "the court maidens delight in X", where X is another, larger, noun phrase: "seeing you crush those who dare challenge you"
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Posted byRhyson Feb 14, 2012, 7:51:13 PMGrinding Gear Games
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The description of Lightning Warp skill mentions lighting damage.
Unless you're kicking over a lamp, it's probably missing an N. :)
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Posted byMark_GGGon Feb 14, 2012, 10:56:25 PMGrinding Gear Games
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Yeah, I understand now what you mean. I originally thought, assuming delight is being used as a noun, it was supposed to mean that the court maidens are so delighted in seeing you (because you are 20% taller than everybody) that your rivals are mentally crushed. Because the maiden cheer for you, not them. Well and in that case it would have had to be "crushes", I believe.
Oh lol, I get you now. In that case, yes, it would indeed be crushes, however you would also need an apostrophe in maidens, to make it possessive: maidens' delight.
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Posted byRhyson Feb 15, 2012, 8:05:58 PMGrinding Gear Games
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There's an item prefix named "Thorney" that should be "Thorny" and a sword type called "Doppleganger" that should be "Doppelganger".
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There's a passive named "Purity of Essense" -- should be "Purity of Essence".
Fixed Thorny and Essence, but the sword is actually Dopplehander, not doppelganger.
Quest Complete vs. Quest Completed? Both seem perfectly good to me. I'll just leave it as it is.
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Posted byRhyson Feb 19, 2012, 5:40:54 PMGrinding Gear Games
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