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i would really like
to be washed up
on the shores
to begin my
path of
exile
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Posted bygdupon Feb 9, 2012, 4:40:38 PM
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Was this supposed to go in the Haiku thread?
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Posted byArticTigeron Feb 9, 2012, 4:41:40 PM
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Was this supposed to go in the Haiku thread?
i dont know maybe
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Posted bygdupon Feb 9, 2012, 4:42:33 PM
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Was this supposed to go in the Haiku thread?
i dont know maybe
Thats not a haiku
or even a fine poem
try again my friend
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Posted byJaambieon Feb 9, 2012, 5:01:01 PM
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i will try again
might not be good tho
you see total crap
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Posted bygdupon Feb 9, 2012, 5:21:24 PM
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i will try again
might not be good tho
you see total crap
Still not a haiku.
Seven syllables in the
second line my friend
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Posted byJaambieon Feb 10, 2012, 3:40:09 PM
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