ZiggyD's Community Unique Design - Names and Flavour Text

Trophies of The Slain Legion

"Ambrius' confidence grew with each strike,
but so did his impatience."
- Victario, the People's Poet
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Faado wrote:
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Phearmark wrote:
Name:
Combined Dreams

Text:
Dreams of power
Dreams of urgency
Entwined together
Stronger together



I really like this idea, my own spin on it would just be to try not to rhyme a word with itself and to rhyme between lines 2 and 4 rather than 3 and 4, so something like:

Dreams of stone
Dreams of the feather
Unbent, unbroken and
Stronger together

Props for the idea though



My initial thought wasn't necessarily trying to rhyme, but adding that to it makes for a neat effect as well :)
Hey Guys,

Thought I'd share my idea on the flavour text, that would be:

"Those who march in the first lines in a battle must be brave, well equipped and ready for the horrors they are about to bring and suffer. May this belt be given to those that distinguish themselves with exceptional courage, stamina and celerity."

-- the first commander of Voll

As for the name, I honestly don't have a clue, let someone more creative advise on that.
(If it was up to me though, I'd give it a name that would suggest this is something strong/durable, and a quick at the same time.)

Hope you can use some of this in the decision.

Cheers!
Last edited by Undisciplined on Jul 22, 2016, 8:01:40 AM
Item name: Dichotomous Tenacity

Flavor Text: “Balance, that's the secret. Moderate extremism. The best of both worlds.”

Quote by : -Edward Abbey


Dichotomous Tenacity refers to dividing your ability to survive into two parts, and the belt raises armor and evasion (also onslaught and fortify). The flavor text is an actual quote from an author (specifically the book Desert Solitaire) that i thought went well with this item.
Last edited by Igcis on Jul 23, 2016, 9:19:07 AM
Daresso's Grit - Vanguard Belt

"Some blows you can not evade, others you can not withstand...
The trick is to tell them apart."
-Daresso - The Sword King


(just a different worded version of my previous entry)
Last edited by dontsleep on Jul 23, 2016, 8:04:11 PM
Bex's Bravery
Vanguard Belt

Protector of the people, weeding out the worst.
Enduring the egos, fighting them first.
For duties done, promotion procured.
The city survives, ascension assured.
Her excellence esteemed, all can attest,
Pride of the people, best of the best.



Alliteration always adds awesomeness.

Come on, Bex, you're the best community manager, you deserve an item named after you.
Thanks for participating, everyone! Submissions for this are now closed.
Exiles loincloth

"Now with 30% more pants - Hargan"

Throw in 3d art for a pair of pants.
Berthold's Intuition

"Offense and Defense are but sides of the same coin, I simply learned to spin it fast enough see both at once."

(OFCOURSE i would see this only after it is closed... eff my timing)
Last edited by Supersonic540 on Nov 8, 2016, 3:00:24 PM

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