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why don't these poems have metre
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For the Carcass Jack

A Splash of Jack
Everyone likes a giant splash
Even when it is a blood filled bash
The music is getting crazy
And Jack is certainly not lazy

Cut and cut for that love
As graceful as a flying dove
He provides all the blood
Isn't he the best bud

What a fantastic party
You don't have to be a smarty
To enjoy this crimson merriment
Just be alive for a moment

Everybody likes a splash of Jack
And with his blades he will hack
To provide a lovely carcass
He will just cut up ol Brutus


Ya i know that last part didn't rhyme XD Been years since i have wrote anything.Not my best poem lol

And just realized the bold text you had put....opps.Ill pay for it and leave the poem here.
Last edited by Steelgrey666 on Sep 29, 2014, 10:41:09 PM
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Steelgrey666 wrote:
For the Carcass Jack

A Splash of Jack
Everyone likes a giant splash
Even when it is a blood filled bash
The music is getting crazy
And Jack is certainly not lazy

Cut and cut for that love
As graceful as a flying dove
He provides all the blood
Isn't he the best bud

What a fantastic party
You don't have to be a smarty
To enjoy this crimson merriment
Just be alive for a moment

Everybody likes a splash of Jack
And with his blades he will hack
To provide a lovely carcass
He will just cut up ol Brutus


Ya i know that last part didn't rhyme XD Been years since i have wrote anything.Not my best poem lol

And just realized the bold text you had put....opps.Ill pay for it and leave the poem here.

thanks! Unfortunately I had 2 Jack's and they've both been claimed already :(
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OlaSarcasm wrote:
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Steelgrey666 wrote:
For the Carcass Jack

A Splash of Jack
Everyone likes a giant splash
Even when it is a blood filled bash
The music is getting crazy
And Jack is certainly not lazy

Cut and cut for that love
As graceful as a flying dove
He provides all the blood
Isn't he the best bud

What a fantastic party
You don't have to be a smarty
To enjoy this crimson merriment
Just be alive for a moment

Everybody likes a splash of Jack
And with his blades he will hack
To provide a lovely carcass
He will just cut up ol Brutus


Ya i know that last part didn't rhyme XD Been years since i have wrote anything.Not my best poem lol

And just realized the bold text you had put....opps.Ill pay for it and leave the poem here.

thanks! Unfortunately I had 2 Jack's and they've both been claimed already :(


Well bummer. I did however PM you with buyout offers if that is cool :)
Second try here i come.


Wings Of Entropy


Oh fly with the wings of chaos
Poison all those amongst us
Lay their flesh wide open
To allow the venom to take action

Oh fly with the wings of flame
The bright fires that remain untamed
Every swing turns them to ash
As they burn from every gash

What was one becomes two
A double slash as he flew
Two handed Axe this is not
But it seems his foes forgot

The wings of chaos and flame
they have all but one name
As they lay there all bloody
We call them the Wings of Entropy

(Entropy is a hard word to properly rhyme with lol)
Last edited by Steelgrey666 on Sep 30, 2014, 1:09:25 PM
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Steelgrey666 wrote:
Second try here i come.


Wings Of Entropy
Oh fly with the wings of chaos
Poison all those amongst us
Lay their flesh wide open
To allow the venom to take action

Oh fly with the wings of flame
The bright fires that remain untamed
Every swing turns them to ash
As they burn from every gash

What was one becomes two
A double slash as he flew
Two handed Axe this is not
But it seems his foes forgot

The wings of chaos and flame
they have all but one name
As they lay there all bloody
We call them the Wings of Entropy

(Entropy is a hard word to properly rhyme with lol)

a poem doesn't have to rhyme, but you're totally getting the wings for this! :)
For Pledge of hands...

Oh, tis' of thee pledge of hands,
for I have searched for yee' on a pale moon light
Unscorned by thine beauty;
I flail myself towards your uncanny masterpiece.

But, only desire is to taunt?
For I search and yet RNG hasn't yet to bless me.
You'll make a beggar of me,
curse my name and have me forced to my knees to pray a poor-mans hope.

Why must it cut the flesh and leave no marks?
The tempting imagery across my screen;
It speaks to me.

Brings pity to my shame,
I know whom truly holds this blame;
for it is not I, yet Wilson in the sky.

RNG has forsaken me.
Last edited by TheDevilWearsPrada on Oct 1, 2014, 4:51:50 PM
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For Pledge of hands...

Oh, tis' of thee pledge of hands,
for I have searched for yee' on a pale moon light
Unscorned by thine beauty;
I flail myself towards your uncanny masterpiece.

But, only desire is to taunt?
For I search and yet RNG hasn't yet to bless me.
You'll make a beggar of me,
curse my name and have me forced to my knees to pray a poor-mans hope.

Why must it cut the flesh and leave no marks?
The tempting imagery across my screen;
It speaks to me.

Brings pity to my shame,
I know whom truly holds this blame;
for it is not I, yet Wilson in the sky.

RNG has forsaken me.

it's really nice of you to participate, but any buyout over 1 chaos or 1 fuse isn't a part of the poetry deal, sorry.
VON (infractem decimation bow)

Darkness, despair, agony
Faith in life spirals down
Trapped in pure blackness
Yet a light shines above

A single wish to reach it
A wish that is miles away
Two wanderers pass by
Sunshine from one, chills from the other

A new life starts to begin
A life still filled with hardship
Yet, better than before
Because you are not alone

Heart starts to mend
Mind starts to believe
Sunshine and chills start to grow
Love enters your soul

Wish once again
Miles become feet
Sunshine and chills fade away
However, light shines down

Doesn't rhyme or anything xD but just typed out whatever I was feeling at the moment haha.
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Broken415 wrote:
VON (infractem decimation bow)

Darkness, despair, agony
Faith in life spirals down
Trapped in pure blackness
Yet a light shines above

A single wish to reach it
A wish that is miles away
Two wanderers pass by
Sunshine from one, chills from the other

A new life starts to begin
A life still filled with hardship
Yet, better than before
Because you are not alone

Heart starts to mend
Mind starts to believe
Sunshine and chills start to grow
Love enters your soul

Wish once again
Miles become feet
Sunshine and chills fade away
However, light shines down

Doesn't rhyme or anything xD but just typed out whatever I was feeling at the moment haha.

I sent you a message, hit me up later. and thanks for the lines!

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