Brotherhawk...
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Did I get it right?
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“Excuse me Moon.” A large dark and bald man towered over my little area, “Mind if I join you?” His voice was almost bass it was so deep and smooth. I gave him another look over and admired his expensive suit. Custom tailored, but with bare feet. He held out his hand and I shook it. I noticed that there were many tattoos going up his arm, but his dark skin and the dark lighting of the lounge hid them well.
“Be my guest.” I said and took my foot off the other chair were I had been resting it. He smile a mouthful of dazzling white teeth made even more white by his dark face. “Mister?” I added. “Brotherhawk.” He said and sat down.
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Curse of the Mooned - available now on dastardlydrafts.com under the Mooned Chronicles tab. Comments always welcome.
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Perfect! This is Brilliant! So much hype :D
You're the best Moon! |
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But wait there's more!
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just kidding
"You can't bash someone else's shitty taste in music when you listen to 'grindcore'" -TheWretch̢ Last edited by Fire_Kid on Sep 1, 2014, 9:47:22 PM
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" Been busy rewriting another older story that I never finished. Now I'm glad that I picked on you in it.
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Not kidding. Its fun though.
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Two more
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One more
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I lied again.
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I love picking on all of you. H&K's
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" I clicked on all the spoiler tags. No regrets. Youre the goat, you goat. keep it up. |
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Brilliant! Great read that was. I love the portrayal. I think I need to start walking around wearing suits and no shoes
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